Your id card has been stolen. Write a letter to the local police station, giving detail. Who are you? What happened? Ask what you should do to get a new id card.

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing

this

letter to file a complaint about the identification

card

of the

university

that has been stolen yesterday. I am Eva Smith, a student at Oxford

University

, London, and studying for a bachelor of computers in 2nd year.

Moreover

, I live on the

university

campus and I need an id

card

to enter the

university

Furthermore

, I missed it between the 27th and 28th of February when I went to visit the museum with my friends that were not far away from my

university

campus. I think I lost my

card

in the museum because there were a lot of crowds.

However

, when I came to the

university

at that time realized that I lost my

card

. All in all, I informed the dean about the lost id

card

, and

then

he suggested I file a report at the police station.

Moreover

, my

card

was valid till the 31st of March 2023. It has my name, photographs, and the logo of the

university

. My id number is BC12345. As I am a student and I need that

card

. I am hoping that you will file a complaint and send a copy. So I can apply for a new identification

card

. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Eva Smith.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

218 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your id card has been stolen. Write a letter to the local police station, giving detail. Who are you? What happened? Ask what you should do to get a new id card.

The Greeting

Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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