Your id card has been stolen. Write a letter to the local police station, giving detail. Who are you? What happened? Ask what you should do to get a new id card.

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing

this

letter to file a complaint about the identification

card

of the

university

that has been stolen yesterday. I am Eva Smith, a student at Oxford

University

, London, and studying for a bachelor of computers in 2nd year.

Moreover

, I live on the

university

campus and I need an id

card

to enter the

university

Furthermore

, I missed it between the 27th and 28th of February when I went to visit the museum with my friends that were not far away from my

university

campus. I think I lost my

card

in the museum because there were a lot of crowds.

However

, when I came to the

university

at that time realized that I lost my

card

. All in all, I informed the dean about the lost id

card

, and

then

he suggested I file a report at the police station.

Moreover

, my

card

was valid till the 31st of March 2023. It has my name, photographs, and the logo of the

university

. My id number is BC12345. As I am a student and I need that

card

. I am hoping that you will file a complaint and send a copy. So I can apply for a new identification

card

. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Eva Smith.

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The Greeting

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

218 words

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Your id card has been stolen. Write a letter to the local police station, giving detail. Who are you? What happened? Ask what you should do to get a new id card.

The Greeting

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