You live near a public school. The school asked residents to help maintain the school building and playground. Write a letter to the principal. Explain why would you like to help. Tell them how you can help. Let them know when you are available.

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing

this

letter to help in the renovation of the

school

building

as well as

the ground.

Firstly

, I am interested in providing help with the task because I was a student at an international bachpan

school

and want to contribute to

this

project.

Moreover

, I would feel proud if I assist to maintain the building and the recreational area.

Furthermore

, as I am a member of the architecture department. I can help the

school

to make a stunning design for the building

along with

this

, I can

also

suggest some colour combinations, and it would be easy to furnish the

school

building with the help of my team. All in all, I work as a manager in an architectural construction department and I have numerous responsibilities related to my work. In the end, I will be available on weekends because at that time I am free from my work and I will make a design

according to

your taste without wasting a single penny. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Eva Smith.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

181 words

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