In the future, nobody will buy printed news papers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The
Technology has developed Correct article usage
apply
on
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at
peak
level, the upcoming generation will prefer more on Correct article usage
a peak
Add an article
the website
a website
website
or social media to know current updates Fix the agreement mistake
websites
instead
of spending money to buy the newspaper
. According to
studies, the
Correct article usage
apply
people
who were above 60 years only continuing
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continued
there
habituation of reading habit. The below paragraphs provided some Correct your spelling
their
prons
and cons of new forms for the reading method.
Correct your spelling
pros
The modern
development introduced different types of sources to gain knowledge about current updates. The Internet bought Correct article usage
Modern
the
things Correct article usage
apply
on
Change preposition
at
faster
rate regarding any news related to sports, politics and others. Correct article usage
a faster
Couple
of months before the FIFA World Cup was held Change the article
A couple
at
Qatar in December 2022. From the beginning onwards including Change preposition
in
opening
ceremony till Correct article usage
the opening
to
the final day of Change preposition
apply
match
, updates of each Add an article
the match
sportsmen
performance were getting through online as Change noun form
sportsmen's
a
Correct article usage
apply
live
. Earlier, Replace the word
life
people
have to depend on newspaper
for getting information but it Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
also
excludes some of them too. Thus
, the Internet plays an important role.
On the other hand
, political
related news Change the adjective
politically
were
getting within Change the verb form
was
a
seconds, recently Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
a
election was held Change the article
an
at
Assam, Change preposition
in
how
many Correct word choice
and
people
had elected
and Add a missing verb
been elected
complete
history was getting through Correct article usage
the complete
website
and Add an article
a website
in
online applications. Change preposition
apply
Along with
that immediately which political party got the seats and after some days who was chief minister was got through live news. People
who don't know knowledge of handling phones were
depended on Unnecessary verb
apply
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the newspaper
newspaper
by next day or by means of television. Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
Hence
, Add an article
the pupil
a pupil
pupil
will spend more Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
to
online than old system.
In conclusion, first of all choosing the Change preposition
apply
newspaper
or the Internet is belongs to person for getting information. But I am agreeing with the statement spending lot of funds for
hard Change preposition
on
copy
is Fix the agreement mistake
copies
waste
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a waste
according
present Add the preposition
toaccording
life style
.Correct your spelling
lifestyle
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