The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main fitures and make comparisons where relevant
the given maps illustrate the changes that have been made in a secondary
school
in 3 different years, 1950, 1980 and 2010.
In brief, it is clear that
houses in the first year have been replaced for other purposes and one thing that somehow has remained unchanged is the playground which exists in all three years.
In 1950 there are houses in
the left upper side of the Change preposition
on
school
and in
the right upper Change preposition
on
side
there is the Add a comma
,side
school
itself. In the next year however
the houses are replaced completely with a science block and a car park Add a comma
,however
while
the school
in
the right is now the Change preposition
on
schools
main building.
In 2010, the car park Change noun form
school's
has
expanded to a larger capacity and Unnecessary verb
apply
has
made the sports field smaller compared to what it was in 1980 but the science block and Unnecessary verb
apply
school
main building haveremained
unchanged over the course of 30 years. Correct your spelling
have remained
Play ground
has stayed in the same spot but it has gotten smaller considering that some part of what was a Correct your spelling
Playground
play ground
in 1950 and 1980 Correct your spelling
playground
has
Unnecessary verb
apply
became
a field in 2010.Change the verb form
become
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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