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Band 7.5

You recently made a journey by train. When you got on the train, you realised you had left a bag on the train. Write a letter to the station manager. In your letter: • give details of where and when you left the bag • describe the bag and its contents • suggest how you could get the bag back

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Dear Sir, My name is Sakshi Kansara and I was travelling from Toronto to Niagra via Go Train on 2nd April 2025, Tuesday. My ticket number is 124F0G and my seat number is 26H. I am writing
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 letter in order to file a request as I forgot my
bag
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 on the train when I reached my location. I have tried contacting the lost and found department but unfortunately, I am unable to connect a call with them. I will share some details of my
bag
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.
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, it is black coloured tote
bag
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of
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 Louis Vuitton and is huge in size.
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, I have a small pouch in which there are three credit cards, cash, my license and house keys.
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, there are some really important documents for the company I work for.
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. in the small section of the backside of the
bag
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 you will find a photo of Jesus, which will help you to recognize my
bag
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. Please let me know if you require any
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 information from my end, you can contact me on 0027896543 or [email protected]. I will be more than grateful if you can help me with
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 concern.
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, I will come and pick up the
bag
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 either from Toronto or Niagra's 'lost and found department'. Thank you so much for your support and looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Sakshi

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coherence and cohesion
Ensure that the sentence structures are varied and complex where appropriate, which can enhance your writing style.
task achievement
You might want to include a more detailed request for how you desire to be contacted or suggest a preferred method for the return of the bag.
coherence and cohesion
The letter is well-structured with clear paragraphs, making it easy to follow.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and formal, which is suitable for the context.
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