The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.
The table chart below illustrates the various birds observed by season in woodchuck. That partial list includes the two seasons and the names of all species listed.
In addition
, to the eighth species. There are birds identified in both seasons. The given information represents in which season the specific types are available.
Initially
, in the
summer
there is more variety than in the
winter
.
Furthermore
, there are types available in both
winter
and
summer
.
For instance
, cardinals and crows and woodpeckers.
Otherwise
, these are examples of a group that are only observed in
summer
(bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles, and vireos). And the other hand, juncos were seen only in
winter
. To summarize, the given table shows the birds observed in the woodchuck country. They are
also
, divided into two separate groups based on the weather in a partial list.
Overall
the
summer
witnessed the presence of numerous types compared with the
winter
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words summer, winter with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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