The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.
The graph illustrates the average daily
temperature
of Brisbane
and Canberra
. Overall
the minimum temperature
in Canberra
was observed in June and July while
the maximum temperature
was in December January and February
. A similar trend was observed in Brisban
To compare the least temperature
recorded is in June which is below 1 degree in Brisbane
however
Canberra
's lowest temperature
is approximately 10 degrees in July. The two cities have drastic differences in their minimum and maximum temperature
. The maximum temperature
recorded in Brisbane
is 30 degrees in February
while
the maximum temperature
in Canberra
is above 25 degrees which are
in January and Correct subject-verb agreement
is
February
.
Looking into bar
chart Add an article
a bar
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
potrays
Correct your spelling
portrays
average
number of Change the article
an average
the average
days
with rainfall
in two cities of
Australia. Change preposition
in
Brisbane
seems to have a high amount of rainfall
around the year which is 14 days
, while
Canberra
seems to record fewer number days
with an approximation of 10 days
. The maximum rainfall
that is
recorded in Brisbane
is in February
and March while
the maximum rain recorded in Canberra
is in June, July and August which apparently are the months that recorded the least rainfall
in Brisbane
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