It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it’s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion.

Every person has his/her knack for a specific subject
such
as music and sports. Some people think that talent is inherited and transferred by
genes
from ancestors to the next generation. Others argue that
this
can be learned to become gifted as a good sportsperson or musician. In my opinion, even though genetics are important, education and environment can
also
make a child talented. The
genes
determine all characteristics of individuals through the transmission of DNA from generation to generation. Talents and intelligence have specific
genes
which produce well-known proteins to express a habit
such
as the ability to do sports or play a musical instrument.
For example
, the deletion of a part of the chromosome,
such
as the short arm 5th chromosome decreases the learning ability of music.
Therefore
, inheritance has a tremendous effect on intelligence and learning talents.
On the other hand
, education and environment exert a substantial influence on genetic expression. These epigenetic factors change the presentation of a trait that originally is varying in expression.
For instance
, genetically identical twins will have different behaviours if they grow up in different families.
This
means that
genes
are the basic part of behaviours,
whereas
other factors may
also
be important.
Consequently
, environmental situations may change the heritage of identical
genes
despite their integral part of them. In conclusion, both environment and genetics have significant influences on talent.
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