Discuss the disadvantages of eating fast food on health. Why do people eat fast food? What can be done to discourage it?

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Fast
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is commonly consumed in
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day and age.
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its convenience,
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the prevalence of junk-
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restaurants, people from every country eat fast
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on a regular basis.
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,
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comes with serious health detriments, some of which I will touch on in brief.
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, it is addictive. The industries that profit from fast-
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hire culinary engineers to design foods carrying the perfect balance of fat, sugar, and salt
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chemicals and preservatives to turn their menu items into highly palatable, addictive options.
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, people who indulge in junk
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find themselves craving more and more.
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, constantly satisfying one's cravings with nutritionally deprived, high-calorie, hyper-palatable foods can lead to diseases
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as binge-eating disorder, obesity and diabetes. To combat
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, we could
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educate people on
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health
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.
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, the number of convenience
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restaurant chains each with multiple of their own individual branches around every corner is absurdly high. These restaurants are everywhere, making them an easy choice for those who are low on time.
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, these individuals may find themselves going to the nearest hamburger chain to buy a quick-fix combo
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of taking time to cook their own meals on top of their already busy schedules.
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is a common solution amongst busy employees that can inadvertently lead them to feel lethargic and unproductive later in the day. Alternatively, they could resort to a ready-to-eat meal delivery system that could be a healthy choice
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save them time. In conclusion, comfort
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consumption is a common issue
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its addictive nature
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how available and convenient it is. Education
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health-conscious decision-making are effective methods of discouraging its consumption.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unhealthy
  • obesity
  • nutrients
  • heart disease
  • diabetes
  • addictive
  • convenience
  • time constraints
  • marketed
  • accessible
  • regulations
  • availability
  • dependence
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