Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, Recently, I have taken a short cookery
at your renowned institute, and I am writing
letter to express how happy I am about the
, which I attended about a month ago, in an effort to enhance my culinary arts skills. I must admit that even though the
was taught intensively for a good period of four weeks, I felt like the time had passed rather quickly since I enjoyed the
so much. By the way, the best thing about the
was that it comprehensively taught me about the art of making some Italian and oriental desserts quickly and easily.
, I enjoyed learning about the tricks of chopping meats so nicely. After finishing the cookery
, I used some of my cooking skills to prepare some delicious desserts for the birthday party of one of my close friends
in addition
to preparing some of my favourite dishes for my family. Before ending here, I would
like to request you to introduce a short
at your institute on preparing desserts by using different kinds of tropical fruits and vegetables. Thank you once again for conducting
a useful
. Yours faithfully, Andre Dmitry
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea, which should be elaborated upon coherently.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a logical flow throughout the letter, using appropriate paragraphing to guide the reader effortlessly from one point to the next.
task achievement
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task achievement
Keep the tone consistent and suitable for the context of the letter and the reader; a formal tone is appropriate for a letter to an academic course director.
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