Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In present days there are various types of goods and services are available for selection. Some individuals assume that

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nowadays we have a plethora of options to vote on

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things. Increased competition among producers is the main reason and distribution differences impact

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the choices makes me partially agreeable with

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I will explain that. The main reason is the competition between manufacturers.

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, rise the number of productions and services

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human needs.

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, there are a lot of builders who tend to make a vast area of collections regarding every field and some items are fabricated in many colours, sizes and patterns.

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, a biscuits factory make chocolate biscuits for the market and

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another's are making the same one in different size and pattern.

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at the supermarkets people are waiting and thinking for minutes to pick one out of all.

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, the producers are responsible for making choices for the community.

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, most rural areas in the same country do not have many selections as urban regions. Meanwhile, the commercial capital in the country has good access to create and export things

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of main factories, harber and the air-port, productions are not equally distributed in the whole country. As an example, Sri Lanka's shopping malls in the main city present a huge number of preferences in each and every category rather than hill county cities. In that case, options are not available everywhere. In conclusion, in

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people have a chance to choose things

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their preferences.

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, I agreed partially about that because, if the competition makes more options some groups of people are unable to acquire them.

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Topic Vocabulary:

overwhelmed
decision fatigue
paralysis by analysis
consumerism
globalization
personal autonomy
market saturation
option overload
decision-making process
psychological well-being
buyer's remorse
customization
trade-offs
minimalism
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