The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
The bar diagram illustrates, five major towns in
australia
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having their routine
in
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for
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buying and consuming
coffee
and tea.
Overall
, the chart shows major cities
such
as
Sydney
,
Melbourne
, Brisbane,
Adelaide
,
Hobart
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and Hobart
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and their drinking and buying
habbit
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habit
habits
of
coffee
in the
last
4 weeks.In the 5 cities,
Last
4 weeks, People are equally showing high
interset
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interest
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to go to
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a cafe
the cafe
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cafe
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cafes
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and have
coffee
there
itself
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apply
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.
To begin
with,
Sydney
and
Melbourne
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showed
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almost equal in bought fresh
cofee
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coffee
in
last
week. Approximately 40%.
Additionally
Compare to
Hobart
,
brisban
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Brisbane
and
adelaide
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Adelaide
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are less number of bought fresh
coffee
in
last
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the last
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4 weeks.
Hobart
showing
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shows
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near
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nearly
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to
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apply
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40% and
Brisban
and
adelaide
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Adelaide
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showing 35%. Next is instant
coffee
, The percentage showing similar in
Brisban
and
Hobart
. Near to 52% in both cities and
in
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apply
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Adelaide
showing
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shows
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50% and
Melbourne
is just behind the
adelaide
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Adelaide
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presenting 49%.
Last
but not
the
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apply
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least in
instant
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the instant
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coffee
list is
Sydney
only 45%
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of citizen
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citizen
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citizens
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having
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have
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readymade
coffee
. Everyone likes to drink
coffee
in
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the cafe
a cafe
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cafe
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cafes
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.
Melbourne
and
Hobart
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Hobart's
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peoples
showes
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show
almost
same
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the same
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interset, around 62%.
Sydney
showing
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shows
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61% and
brisban
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Brisbane
Brisban
showing
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shows
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55%.
However
, people in
Adelaide
showing
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showed
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only 39%
interset
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interest
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sydney, melbourne, adelaide, hobart, brisban with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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