The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
The bar diagram illustrates, five major towns in
australia
having their routine Change the capitalization
Australia
in
buying and consuming Change preposition
for
coffee
and tea.
Overall
, the chart shows major cities such
as Sydney
, Melbourne
, Brisbane, Adelaide
, Hobart
and their drinking and buying Correct word choice
and Hobart
habbit
of Correct your spelling
habit
habits
coffee
in the last
4 weeks.In the 5 cities, Last
4 weeks, People are equally showing high interset
to go to Correct your spelling
interest
Add an article
a cafe
the cafe
cafe
and have Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
coffee
there itself
.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
To begin
with, Sydney
and Melbourne
showing
almost equal in bought fresh Wrong verb form
showed
cofee
in Correct your spelling
coffee
last
week. Approximately 40%. Additionally
Compare to Hobart
, brisban
and Correct your spelling
Brisbane
adelaide
are less number of bought fresh Change the capitalization
Adelaide
coffee
in last
4 weeks. Correct article usage
the last
Hobart
showing
Wrong verb form
shows
near
Change the word
nearly
to
40% and Change preposition
apply
Brisban
and adelaide
showing 35%. Next is instant Change the capitalization
Adelaide
coffee
, The percentage showing similar in Brisban
and Hobart
. Near to 52% in both cities and in
Change preposition
apply
Adelaide
showing
50% and Wrong verb form
shows
Melbourne
is just behind the adelaide
presenting 49%. Change the capitalization
Adelaide
Last
but not the
least in Correct article usage
apply
instant
Add an article
the instant
coffee
list is Sydney
only 45% Change preposition
of citizen
citizen
Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
having
readymade Wrong verb form
have
coffee
.
Everyone likes to drink coffee
in Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
cafe
. Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
Melbourne
and Hobart
peoples Add the possessive form
Hobart's
showes
almost Correct your spelling
show
same
interset, around 62%. Correct article usage
the same
Sydney
showing
61% and Wrong verb form
shows
brisban
Correct your spelling
Brisbane
Brisban
showing
55%. Wrong verb form
shows
However
, people in Adelaide
showing
only 39% Wrong verb form
showed
interset
.Correct your spelling
interest
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sydney, melbourne, adelaide, hobart, brisban with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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