Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing(for eg. through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

At present,

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technology advancement allows society to be monitored and their conversations

along with

actions.

Moreover

, most of those people, normally, are not aware of it. The biggest problem of it came from that information spreading among crackers (bad hackers) and people looking for committing crimes . I strongly believe that the drawbacks of

this

development are far detrimental and the advantages should not outweigh it. The community is living

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age of technology and equipment

such

as computers, cellphones and cameras are present in their lives. Despite being beneficial in terms of usability, those objects have been used to monitor the routine of individuals by hackers; they want to figure out relevant data like name, national id and even payment card.

For example

, a recent case of fraud was related in Brazil where a woman's credit card have been used by an unknown man for at least 4 years. Probably, he has stolen the numbers through some security failure on her cellphone.

Furthermore

, the population is exposed through security cameras commonly installed in streets or residential houses. The action of installing a camera

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up too many benefits,

however

, it gives the opportunity for a person with bad intentions to spy

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is walking, jogging or even who

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a routine to pass in front of

this

diary.

For instance

, a recent horrible crime was committed by a youngster who observed a girl for 30 days and raped her

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specific hour of the day.

Therefore

, If the camera had not been installed, he would not know her routine.

To conclude

, technology supplies the crowd in many forms,

nevertheless

, in the long

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it affects

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people's security making the world an unsafe place.

Hence

, Hackers and criminalists have been using different approaches to harmful individuals, and

this

disadvantage outweighed any possible advantages.