Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward mention what they have done to help the community say what reward you would like to give this person Write about 150 words. You do not need to write addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
in regard to the advertisement posted in your newspaper Time of India dated 28th January. I would like to nominate Mrs Riddhi Patel for the reward. She is a professor at Delhi University since 1980 and has been contributing to the community since
then
, especially the
slum
community
hence
, I believe she is the right person for the reward. Mrs Patel is doing tremendous work when it comes to the
slum
children. She has educated more than a thousand kids from the
slum
area and
as a result
, most of them are living a very prosperous life.
Additionally
, She
also
helps women to earn money on their own and makes them independent. She is the reason for the smile on the
slum
people's faces. I would suggest rewarding her with the honour of a woman of poor.
In addition
to that, you may arrange the award function for her which will give her the motivation to keep going and inspiration to others. I hope you will consider my suggestion. Yours faithfully, Kishan
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