Some people think that the way to reduce people getting a lot of sugar is to raise the price of sugary products. Do you agree?

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people

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suppose that if the cost of

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consume will be down. Actually, in my

oponion

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opinion

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harmful ingredients for

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body. Another

reason

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sugar

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calories and

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high weight. First and foremost, all of the world

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sugar

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condition being to consume high rate population.

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instance

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Europe and West countries are using

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high grade for the

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habitats

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have money buying products. So if

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price will up lot

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buying

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sugar

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and any products of

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majority level

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damage for

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standart

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standard

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will being to spark. A second

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that

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will top price in its history, some

people

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think that cost is very superior and they can't

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don't consume

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and similar products

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cause to decline

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depend on company behaviour.

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two decades ago

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natural

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resources but now more chemicals

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industry.

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people

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think

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of reduce

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. In conclusion,

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would maintain that because

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diabetic disease. Now every levels

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are suffering from

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and those

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insulin

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life. I would hope

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