Ameuseum near your home is looking for perople to do parttime volantary work . your would like to do some voluntary work at museum.Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary work in your letter , explain why you wannt to so voluntary work and describe some skills and qualities you have that can be useful and details of when you would be available for work

#ameuseum #home #perople #parttime #volantary #work #museum #director #wannt #skills #qualities

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Dear Madam or sir

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you that I am interested in

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volunteering at your museum .I would like to work as a tourist guide. I have

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interest in history and did my

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in history. Working at your place will help me to add my experience

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my resume and will help me to get

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job in future . Apart

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that I have good

communictaion

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positon

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. I enjoy interacting with new people . As

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stated above that my qualification

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job .

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I enjoy educating people about our culture and heritage . I am available on weekends , Friday , Saturday and

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from 10 am to 2 pm . So please let me know when can I start

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I am looking forward to hearing back from you . Yours faithfully , Amrita

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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157 words

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