Ameuseum near your home is looking for perople to do parttime volantary work . your would like to do some voluntary work at museum.Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary work in your letter , explain why you wannt to so voluntary work and describe some skills and qualities you have that can be useful and details of when you would be available for work

Dear Madam or sir
This
letter is in regards to
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you that I am interested in
doing
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volunteering at your museum .I would like to work as a tourist guide. I have
keen
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interest in history and did my
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in history. Working at your place will help me to add my experience
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my resume and will help me to get
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job in future . Apart
form
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that I have good
communictaion
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communication
skills which are required for
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positon
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. I enjoy interacting with new people . As
i
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stated above that my qualification
also
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this
job .
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wise
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I enjoy educating people about our culture and heritage . I am available on weekends , Friday , Saturday and
sunday
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from 10 am to 2 pm . So please let me know when can I start
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I am looking forward to hearing back from you . Yours faithfully , Amrita
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