You have just missed a friend’s party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend explain why you did not attend the party say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party.

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Dear Riddhi, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am extremely sorry for not being able to attend the

party

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which was organised by you

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weekend. I hope the

party

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went well and you guys must have enjoyed it most. I felt terrible for not attending the same. Unfortunately, there was a medical emergency on the day of the

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and I had to rush to the hospital for the same. When I got back, it was too late for me to reach the

party

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at the mentioned time.

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, we cannot bring the time back but we can plan for something else to make up for missing the

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. How about we go for a picnic at Kanha national park next weekend? Please let me know your availability at the earliest and please accept the gift as an apology. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours lovingly, Kishan

Submitted by kishanpatel2550 on Sun Mar 05 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

152 words

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You have just missed a friend’s party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend explain why you did not attend the party say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party.

Nowadays, more people are becoming overweight. Some people think that the solution is to increase the price of fattening food? To what extent do you agree or disagree.

All university students should do some voluntary work to help the local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people think that manufactures and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while other argue that people have the responbility to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many parents are unhappy because of the increasing amount of violence in their children by computer games, TV programs and other leisure activities. What are the harmful effects of such violent programs on children? What are the solutions for this problem?