The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for travelling in the us in 2009

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and bar

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above

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the problems for travellers and why

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make trips to other places in the US in 2009.

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, the most common issue for travellers is how much they pay for the trips which can affect their decision on why they take trips to other places. It seems like

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are most willing to travel for work. The most popular reason for

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to travel is business and it might be because of the effect of the troubles

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have with travelling which are stated in the pie

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. Travelling for work takes up nearly half of the proportion, 43%, followed by personal with 19% and it shows a massive decline for leisure reasons like shopping, social/recreation, and visiting friends with 16%, 10% and 6% respectively. The reason that might be the reason that affects why

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do not want to travel for holiday appears to be the amount of money that travelling requires. It takes about 36% of the pie

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and space for pedestrians seems to be the least of the worries and does not affect the traveller much as it only takes 6%.

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The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for travelling in the us in 2009

In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's digital age, anyone with a smartphone can capture and share photographs. this accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.