The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for travelling in the us in 2009
The pie
chart
and bar Use synonyms
chart
above Use synonyms
illustrate
the problems for travellers and why Change the verb form
illustrates
people
make trips to other places in the US in 2009.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the most common issue for travellers is how much they pay for the trips which can affect their decision on why they take trips to other places. It seems like Linking Words
people
are most willing to travel for work.
The most popular reason for Use synonyms
people
to travel is business and it might be because of the effect of the troubles Use synonyms
people
have with travelling which are stated in the pie Use synonyms
chart
. Travelling for work takes up nearly half of the proportion, 43%, followed by personal with 19% and it shows a massive decline for leisure reasons like shopping, social/recreation, and visiting friends with 16%, 10% and 6% respectively.
The reason that might be the reason that affects why Use synonyms
people
do not want to travel for holiday appears to be the amount of money that travelling requires. It takes about 36% of the pie Use synonyms
chart
and space for pedestrians seems to be the least of the worries and does not affect the traveller much as it only takes 6%.Use synonyms
Submitted by crystalphan77 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Add more linking words.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, people with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼