The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities
The graph displays the average monthly climate in
London
, New York
, and Sydney
, while
the table shows the mean annual hours
of sunshine in these three cities. Overall
, London
and New York
saw warmer temperatures during the year but with a decline at the end
, whereas
the opposite is true for Sydney
.
At the beginning of the period, London
has a higher temperature than New York
, with 8 and approximately 5 respectively. As the heat in both cities increases, New York
's temperature reaches London
's in March, gradually increasing to a peak in July below 30 and around 23 before dropping in December, when New York
's warmth is lower than London
's.
In contrast
, Sydney
's condition fells from January to July, reaching its lowest point just above 15, and rising again towards the end of the term. The table reveals that New York
receives the highest proportion of sunlight with 2535 hours
, which is slightly higher than Sydney
's 2473 hours
. London
receives the least amount of sunshine, with only 1180 hours
in a year.Submitted by Abdu.abetayev on
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