Write a letter to a local council about the closure of playground and explain Why few children are using the playground How to increase teh number of children using the playground Why this is important.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter with regard to the recent abandonment of

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the childrens’

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childrens’

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children’s

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play area. My name is Harsh. I live in the Rameshwar society where

this

playground is stationed. My post box number is 382475. First and foremost, there are not enough

sports

that can force

children

to come out of their homes.

Secondly

, there are no personal coaches for any

sports

which

make

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makes

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them reluctant to learn any new thing from the base.

Lastly

, there is no suitable infrastructure for

children

around the year. I would request you to please install new engaging

sports

which are of their

interests

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interest

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Moreover

benefits

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the benefits

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such

outdoor

sports

should be advertised with the help of word of mouth by parents and local advertising agencies so that we can increase the user base of

pygroud

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playground

based

sports

. It is right to say that seating is a new smoking. it is seen that

children

prefer indoor

sports

to outdoor

sports

, making them "couch potatoes."

This

behavior

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gives birth to diseases like depression, obesity, and diabetes.

As a result

, I would request you to please start the playground for the

children

at the earliest possible date. In anticipation of your response, I remain. Yours faithfully, Harsh Rewari

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

205 words

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Write a letter to a local council about the closure of playground and explain Why few children are using the playground How to increase teh number of children using the playground Why this is important.

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