Instead of requiring primary school students to do experiments themselves, schools should only alllow them to watch experiments demonstrated by teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays
schools
are an important role in student's life
while
they learning,either state boards,government
schools
or CBSE standard
schools
are following the same standards in teaching.In
schools
particularly primary
students
are not allowed to do experiments themselves,only they were allowed to watch the experiments explained by the teachers.Let us see these through my eyes. The valuable part of schooling is the primary level which
children
could able to learn a lot about science and other subjects.For,instance the mentor explains a simple electricity theory by connecting the positive and negative probes to the conductor which will produce electricity to glow the LED lights connected with another end of the probe.Some
children
could able to understand science easily but others are not.,
Certainly
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I believe that practical
knowledge
is very important than theoretical study. ,
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the
students
were not allowed to do any kind of experiments
due to
the fact of security and concern about their safety measures.
Although
safety is a vital role in school same as
knowledge
of
students
is
also
very important to an institution's growth.At the beginning of the primary subject , the kids were very enthusiastic to learn new things very easily and observe quickly.The
children
must need to learn safety measures before they do the experiment themselves.
Finally
, in my ,opinion wisdom is power. The precious thing that could be given to our
children
was practical
knowledge
than paper-based study.When the
students
do themselves they were getting new thoughts and innovative ideas in their brains which is really needed for our society and significant growth in the research field.I totally support and disagree with the above statement and the
students
should be allowed to do the projects on their own to explore the
knowledge
to conclude
my essay.
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