Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,one of the most controversial issues around the world is learning foreign languages
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among
young
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generation.Meanwhile,some professionals believe
children
should learn another
language
in elementary
schools
.But some opine the best age for learning
second
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a second
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language
is
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in
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secondary
schools
.I
am partially agree
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with
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view and I will discuss
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and demerits
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both
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in
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essay with some examples. On the one hand,It is well-established fact that
children
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an early age are more
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enthusiastic
enthused
to learn new things
such
as
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language
rather than secondary school students.Because their brain
are
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more
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fresh and ready to learn everything without
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worries
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or stress.They use their knowledge and can speak easily without being
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about other
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opinions
.
In addition
,
children
can learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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languages
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more efficiently through some fun activities and plays in their primary school or in their
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with
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their parents
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.For
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example
,in some countries
such
as japan and china learning
english
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is compulsory in primary
schools
and the students have to join
english
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class
everyday
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for 30 minutes
and
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as a
result
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when they are young they can speak
fluent
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and can communicate with other
english
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people
easily.
On the other hand
,there are
also
some drawbacks when
childrens
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children
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learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
in primary
schools
.First of all,they might become confused between their mother tongue and second
language
when it comes to grammar
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pronunciation.
Secondly
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a parent
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parent
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parents
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may have no enough time to do some appropriate
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to boost
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their
languages
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knowledge.Another reason that should be mentioned is that
,
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some
children
may
do
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not need to communicate
foreign
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with foreign
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people
or may
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not decide to immigrate to another country in future.In
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it is not only a good way but
also
is
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just
waste
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a waste
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of time.
To sum up
,these days because of
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of technology
people
should learn
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with
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people
around the world and childhood is the best time to acquisition of knowledge without being worried about confusion because
childrens
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children's
children
brain
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capable
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to handle it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Enhance
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Pronunciation
  • Mimic
  • Native-like accent
  • Cultural awareness
  • Sensitivity
  • Exposure
  • Resource allocation
  • Qualified
  • Effective instruction
  • Overwhelmed
  • Curriculum
  • Undermining
  • Mother tongue
  • Prioritizing
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