University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their degree. Do the advantages of this trend outweighs the disadvantages.

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of higher-
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pupils intend to go overseas .The major advantage of
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a better education system and a bright future,though it has some detrimental sides.I will discuss both these advantages and disadvantages and provide a logical conclusion. The main advantage of higher
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in a foreign country is that
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find better facilities in terms of
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.To be precise, lots of brilliant
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live in developing countries ,where the government can'
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afford all the necessary types of equipment.
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why they go overseas to
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their favourite subject.
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,every year thousand of
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left Bangladesh for
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study
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.Another advantage is that better lifestyle.
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who left their country for higher
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find their way of life.After finishing graduation they find well jobs and live a peaceful life.In the meantime,if any student goes overseas to
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he or she is able to earn money
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his or
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. Cultural difference is one of the primary problems for
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.That means when he or she goes to a new country don'
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able to cope with their food , clothes,language and so on.
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,
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from all over the world go to
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countries to
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.
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,they find food problems because in Europe individuals eat fast food
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of
a traditional meals
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.
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,
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suffer for meals.Another disadvantage is the expense of living and studying.The expense of
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is much higher for international
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.Sometimes they aren'
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able to continue their
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because of money. In conclusion,
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overseas
study
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is good for university
students
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because they are connected with advanced teaching systems and other facilities which poor countries didn'
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provide.
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, the cost of living and
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is too much for
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as
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the cultural variation.
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