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The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared
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The given charts illustrate the outcomes of a questionnaire regarding adult education. The bar
chart
 conveys the reasons why adults pursue education and the pie
chart
show
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 how
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society believes the costs should be shared.
According to
 the
chart
, 40 adults choose to study because they have
interest
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an interest
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 in the subject which is the major reason
in
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the given
chart
. The second prime
reasons
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reason
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 for
following
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 education is to gain qualifications which only has a slight difference of two
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 the first reason. The smallest number among all reasons was to meet
people
 which only 9
people
 had mentioned it.
People
 think that 40%, which is nearly half of the whole
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the
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cost, should be
coverd
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covered
 by the individual who is
pursueing
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pursuing
 studying.
Least
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The least
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 amount of costs
however
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, should be covered by
tax payers
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taxpayers
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 which
is
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are
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 25%, exactly one-fourth of the entire cost.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 most
people
 decide to follow their studies because of their
interst
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interest
 in that subject or in order to get qualifications.
On the other hand
,
cost
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the cost
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 ought to be
payed
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paid
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 mostly by the individual.
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