The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared
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chart
conveys the reasons why adults pursue education and the pie Use synonyms
chart
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show
how Correct subject-verb agreement
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society believes the costs should be shared.
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According to
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, 40 adults choose to study because they have Use synonyms
interest
in the subject which is the major reason Correct article usage
an interest
in
the given Change preposition
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chart
. The second prime Use synonyms
reasons
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reason
following
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with
the first reason. The smallest number among all reasons was to meet Change preposition
from
people
which only 9 Use synonyms
people
had mentioned it.
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think that 40%, which is nearly half of the whole Use synonyms
of
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the
cost, should be Correct article usage
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coverd
by the individual who is Correct your spelling
covered
pursueing
studying. Correct your spelling
pursuing
Least
amount of costs Correct article usage
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however
, should be covered by Add the comma(s)
,however
tax payers
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taxpayers
is
25%, exactly one-fourth of the entire cost.
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are
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
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people
decide to follow their studies because of their Use synonyms
interst
in that subject or in order to get qualifications. Correct your spelling
interest
On the other hand
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cost
ought to be Correct article usage
the cost
payed
mostly by the individual.Correct your spelling
paid
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