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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city, while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

#city #life #countryside
Nowadays, there is a huge influx to big cities, as it is considered that the
life
 quality is of a higher level there, whilst some
people
 find
life
 closer to
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nature better.
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 I will deliver my arguments on
this
 issue. First and foremost,
it is clear that
the
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there are more amenities in big cities making a resident’s
life
 easier. The presence of
big
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 variety of shops and malls makes a desired product to be obtained simpler.
This
 matter makes
people
 admire
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 lifestyle.
Additionally
, a vast majority of
people
 come to metropolises being appealed by the number of jobs being offered here. Another key point about the issue might be the supply of basic and vital resources demanded
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a
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human survival. It is not a secret that
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cuts
of
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 electricity, water and gas supply for
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human’s
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life
 may happen on
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 basis in some areas.
This
 fact might raise numerous complaints about
the
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life
 in rural areas. Looking at the other side of the argument, it might be noticed that
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life
 in a town might not be as pleasant as it is mentioned above, as a big amount of industrial processes make big cities more contaminated places to live in. In
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research, it was shown that the tendency to settle down in
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 increases among
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people
 over 65. Those who decide, to move far from urban areas mostly are dissatisfied with
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, as they seek a place with cleaner air to breath and with a more
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 environment to be surrounded by.
To conclude
, I think that every person needs to decide where to live based on
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 needs and desires they have. I think that a town with
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 medium vicinity of
people
 is more suitable for youngsters who aim at building a career,
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whenever the age goes up
countryside
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 seems to be more congenial.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • metropolitan
  • infrastructure
  • cosmopolitan
  • commute
  • sociocultural
  • prosperity
  • sustainability
  • rural
  • tranquility
  • urbanization
  • relocation
  • residential
  • populace
  • ecological footprint
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