in some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
The number of
people
who are interested in knowing the history
of their accommodation
has been increasing in some countries. What is the root cause of this
curiosity and what can people
do to solve this
complicated question? It is clear we can trace the reason back to TV programs broadcasting many historical buildings in which people
live, and we must do everything we can to handle the situation: namely by adopting an individual and group approach
to comprehend the
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apply
history
.
First of all, we must recognize many TV programs all around the world broadcast topics which are related to history
. These can include the history
of people
's accommodation
. By way of an example, some TV companies collaborate with university professors in order to figure out the background of buildings in both cities and suburbs. According to
the article in the Asahi Shimbun newspaper published last
month, eight out of ten Japanese adults answered they got interested in the history
of their properties because of the above-mentioned programs. Therefore
, more and more people
are becoming interested in the
Correct article usage
apply
history
.
In order to research the history
of people
's properties, people
should engage in an individual and group approach
to figure out it. As
an individual way, Change preposition
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people
could use academic or historical articles to find out the information
related to their accommodation
. Actually, this
movement is already occurring in some countries in East Asia with great success. In terms of a group approach
, people
should request their government to reveal the history
. If many people
could submit letters of appeal to their government, the information
will be provided. As a consequence
of these measures, people
will know the history
of their accommodation
.
In conclusion, many people
have been paying attention to their properties and therefore
some approach
should be taken. We must solve this
by obtaining necessary information
from articles and requesting the government to reveal the historical information
of the house or building where we live.Submitted by ryohei.1015.golf on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
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