Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him.

Dear
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David, I’ve just moved into your house and your rent increment intimation is quite a surprise to me. I do agree that your house is in the central location and is maintained in good condition. But I’d
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like to let you know that I have enquired about some nearby houses and found that they are rented at a lesser rate for the same facilities. My wife has recently delivered a baby and is on maternity leave. So we will take some time to settle down and manage our
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. If you agree to continue with the current amount, we would like to renew our lease for another 1 year. We have
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been very prompt in paying our rent. I would like you to consider all these factors and re-think
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your decision. Despite all these reasons, if you are stubborn
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increasing the rent, we have no option, but to vacate. Yours Sincerely James
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
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