Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him.
Dear
Mr.
David,
I’ve just moved into your house and your rent increment intimation is quite a surprise to me. I do agree that your house is in the central location and is maintained in good condition. But I’d Change the punctuation
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like to let you know that I have enquired about some nearby houses and found that they are rented at a lesser rate for the same facilities.
My wife has recently delivered a baby and is on maternity leave. So we will take some time to settle down and manage our Linking Words
expenditure
. If you agree to continue with the current amount, we would like to renew our lease for another 1 year. We have Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
also
been very prompt in paying our rent. I would like you to consider all these factors and re-think Linking Words
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your decision.
Despite all these reasons, if you are stubborn Change preposition
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increasing the rent, we have no option, but to vacate.
Yours Sincerely
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite