You are get home and have a problem with a peace abhi equipment that you use for a job at a letter to the shop or company with supplied the equipment in your letter describe the problem with a equipment explain how problem is affecting your life say what you want to shop or company to do

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Dear sir, Hope

this

letter finds you in good health.

last

week, I ordered

keyboard

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for my personal computer but it malfunctions frequently during my work. Some letters are not responding when I am typing

as a result

I frequently had to plug and unplug the computer switch

making

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causing

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disruption

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a disruption

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in my performance. It is always

hetic

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hectic

to go through

suchproblem

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such a problem

. I kindly request you to change the faulty parts as soon as possible with a new one making my daily routine easier.

your

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sincerely Sailesh

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

86 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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