The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

The given flow chart gives information about the way to produce garden fertilizer from recycled organic waste. Looking from an

overall

perspective, it can be seen that there are five main stages in the process, beginning with buying a plastic container and ending with using compost to fertilize the garden. The process of creating compost starts with the step of preparing a container made from plastic, which has a special structure with four open positions to let the air circulate and be able to contain up to 2 m3 components. Afterwards, waste, which principally includes newspaper, grass and food, is put in one by one to become a number of layers with a height of 15 cm. Once the previous step is finished, it turns to the third step, when nitrogen and hot water are used to blend all the components together before being overlaid so that the waste inside can be heated. After 6 months, compost will be produced and it

then

can be used for cultivating crops.

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The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

Too much emphasis to given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

is better for children if the whole family including aunts, uncles, and so on are involved in a child’s upbringing, rather than just their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the radio is the best way to get new while others believe that TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job.On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Disscuss both sides and give your opinion.