Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastics do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem.

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Nowadays, the usage of
plastic
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has reached
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its
heighest
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highest
point and damages the earth significantly. It is believed that
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products
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as bags, bottles and packets are harmful
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nature. In
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its repercussions and
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measures
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it. To commence with, It is not degradable as other materials.
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, there are detrimental impacts of it on the whole ecosystem. Many people throw
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garbage in those polythene bags and animal tends to eat it which is very dangerous for their health.
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population of the world consume
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meat in their meals.
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, we become prey
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various diseases. It is reported in one of the articles that almost five
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of humans
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from
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that has no cure.
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,
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is not suitable
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us because of
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reasons. There are many solutions the curb the issue. First of all, the
government
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should encourage its citizens to use biodegradable
products
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.
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, they should introduce strict laws against the usage of
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.
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, factories should follow the regulations provided by the
government
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. Companies should invest some money to make
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alternative products
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products
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rather than
plastic
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. Individuals should discourage the
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of
plastic
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products
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and carry other alternatives.
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,
government
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and private companies should find
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ways to recycle
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plastic
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and reduce its usage.
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,
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there are many problem
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with
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plastic
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products
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, individuals and companies can solve the issues with the help of
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government
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the government
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.
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