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Some people think that watching TV programmes can help children’s development while others disagree. What is your opinion?

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A few days without personal communications and going out Has anyone ever thought that we all would be locked in our own homes for a few days? I couldn’t believe that
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 unless a quarantine began. Those enforced measures against the spread of
virus
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 were taken almost all over the world. That was the
time
 everyone fully realized the importance of
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 communication and
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 of going out. The ordinary things we had always taken for granted became strictly forbidden and the most desirable with
time
. A lot of people had to face
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 big challenge of being locked in their homes with their family members for a long
time
. Others were struggling with getting used to
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 distantly. At the same
time
, most of us felt cut off from our friends and favourite places to go, to say nothing about travelling.
On the other hand
, the quarantine turned out some good points which we can benefit from now.
While
 struggling with the new challenges we learnt how to work and study distantly. That has brought more freedom and
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 to our life.
As a result
, some companies don’t need to rent offices anymore, still keeping their employers working from home, and that
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 them money. Online shopping and delivery system developed so much, that it’s possible to get every little thing delivered at no
time
 without any charge. I would like
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the English saying - every cloud has a silver lining. The things that scared us at the first sight one day might become a part of our everyday life.
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