Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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some people that the
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who educate in private
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should not be forced to pay
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which spend
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. I personally disagree with
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view for the following reasons.
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, it is not
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for rich parents not to pay financial resources for
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their
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are studying at a private school.
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can lead to more
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for the citizens who live life on the edge and justice will not be done.
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dedicated to public educational properties for rich people ,
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the
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task would be two times more than the previous one for poorer families.
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, if wealthy families were given a tax discount for sending their
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to primary school, we might observe
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pressure or
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inequality where poorer families pay higher
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as opposed to the rich.
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,
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of these
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would be benefited
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in their lives. To clarify,
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the quality of the
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in state
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will get higher, there would be
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more
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.
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its
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period of time, the public
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will provide more well-known teachers for better training,so the number of
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employees
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will increase by a significant margin. Meanwhile,
taxes
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for
education
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stays as necessary as other
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do
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as budget allocation for health,bills,fire station and other resources.
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other
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that we might not need in our lives ,we all should pay for the
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of
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education
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system.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tax exemption
  • public education
  • private schools
  • collective responsibility
  • societal welfare
  • equitable access
  • financial burden
  • social cohesion
  • tax credits
  • vouchers
  • subsidies
  • state-funded
  • socioeconomic disparities
  • public vs. private sector
  • quality of education
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