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some people claim that not enoughof the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recyclings for governments to make it legal requirment. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

#people #enoughof #waste #home #recyclings #governments #requirment #laws
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In
this
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 present era, a high population add more waste things to the environment. Even they have the ability to recycle. In my opinion, the
government
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 should take legal
actions
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 to protect the world. At present, a high number of
people
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 will lead to more garbage.
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, governments lose
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control over collecting used things and human doesn’t have enough idea about the
process
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 related to re-using.
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,
people
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 have many overcome regarding
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process
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. Some claimed that all the responsibilities are with the
government
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, and they have paid taxes for
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 issue.
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, the
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 failed to get
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.
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,
this
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 method will be good if it starts from
home
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.
Home
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 is the basic point which has minimum wastages.
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, they have so many overcome
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 as limited space.
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, the
government
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 should give the instruction and the basic knowledge about
re-using
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 plastic and garbage. By the way, legal
action
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 should apply to
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process
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.
Otherwise
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,
people
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 won’t start
this
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process
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. As an example, the
people
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 who are throwing waste
thing
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 to the rivers and the environment should remand.
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, the municipal council should apply
the
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high taxes.
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, the environment and
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human gets benefits.
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,
people
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 can produce organic chemicals at
home
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. Most
of
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people
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the people
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 think it’s difficult to
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 with their busy lifestyle.
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, more
people
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 are not going to start.
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, putting the law on society will change the mindset of
people
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.
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, the thinking patterns of
human
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humans
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 can only change
according to
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 legal
action
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.
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, my recommendation is to start recycling at
home
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 by getting more
action
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 from putting laws.
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