Government needs to spend money to encourage the development of sports and art of school students, rather than to support professional sports and art events. Do you agree or disagree?

Government

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The government

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should support the people who are interested in

sports

and

arts

but need to maintain certain rules and regulations for people to be eligible for the funds. The administration should not only back students who are interested in

sports

and

arts

but need to encourage professionals as well,

However

school of thought is that I believe authority should encourage professional

athletes

and

arts

more than school students.

To begin

with, if the

government

encourages professional

athletes

then

those bring name and fame to the country.Because these professional

athletes

are experienced and can compete with various countries'

athletes

in international

events

like the Olympics.

For instance

, in the 2021 Olympics the javelin ,throw one of the participants from India got a gold medal.

However

, the

government

financially support the athlete to go ahead and participate in upcoming

sports

events

.

On the other hand

, the

athletes

who competed in international

events

in their life. Post-retirement these

athletes

can become excellent coaches for the next generation. And

this

kind of athlete will be an inspiration for upcoming

sports

enthusiasts.

For example

, one of the professional lady

athletes

was from the USA and she was very good at gymnastics her post-retirement started a big training centre to prepare new

athletes

.

In addition

to that coming

too

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,

arts

there are ample people very good at art

events

such

as dance, singing, paintings etc.

And these

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These

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artists

also

performed on international stages.

For example

, one of the dance groups from India got first prize in the international dancing competition which was held in the USA in 2019. In conclusion, I disagree that the

government

should support

sports

and

arts

for students

instead

of that I believe they should encourage professional

athletes

and

arts

.if the

government

makes it happen

then

this

will be a good initiative for all the

athletes

who want to journey in their dream

sports

and

arts

.