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More and more people today moving away from where their friends and family live. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

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Nowadays many people are getting away from the areas
which
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in which
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 their family and friends reside. There are a number of advantages and disadvantages of
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 development that should be considered. On the one hand, there are some positive sides
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this
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 situation.
Firstly
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, most of the people in the villages want to move to urban cities. Because in there it has many
reliable
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 facilities than in villages.
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, better healthcare, wage and others.
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, we all know that in some countries
about
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all the universities or institutes are situated in ,
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,
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the capital
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 of the
country
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.
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,
the
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applicants to universities
which
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who
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 live in other parts of the
country
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 visit there
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for
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 the aim of
study
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. It is very good. Because they study and
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 work and
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 they feed their family in the future.
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, one
diadvantageous
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disadvantageous
advantageous
 evident to move to another area is that when people do
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, they feel alone and they cannot communicate with their family members or close friends face-to-face. We all know that, if they want to see their siblings and parents, it will be very difficult because they may live
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in another
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 part of the
country
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 or another
country
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. The other drawback
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, in this case,
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this
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 case is likely to be
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a lack
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 of money. Taking
young
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the young
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 generation as an example at
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 point, when they go to another place, they cannot easily live and earn money. To survive, they have to work hard from their childhood.
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 of
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, it may cause many problems
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 their body or life.
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, there are some beneficial and non-beneficial sides
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 emigrating from where they live with their family at the same time.
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