More and more people today moving away from where their friends and family live. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

Nowadays many people are getting away from the areas
which
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their family and friends reside. There are a number of advantages and disadvantages of
this
development that should be considered. On the one hand, there are some positive sides
in
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this
situation.
Firstly
, most of the people in the villages want to move to urban cities. Because in there it has many
reliable
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facilities than in villages.
For example
, better healthcare, wage and others.
Secondly
, we all know that in some countries
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all the universities or institutes are situated in ,
for instance
,
capital
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of the
country
.
Therefore
,
the
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applicants to universities
which
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who
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live in other parts of the
country
visit there
to
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the aim of
study
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. It is very good. Because they study and
then
work and
also
they feed their family in the future.
On the other hand
, one
diadvantageous
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disadvantageous
advantageous
evident to move to another area is that when people do
this
, they feel alone and they cannot communicate with their family members or close friends face-to-face. We all know that, if they want to see their siblings and parents, it will be very difficult because they may live
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part of the
country
or another
country
. The other drawback
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, in this case,
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this
case is likely to be
lack
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a lack
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of money. Taking
young
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the young
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generation as an example at
this
point, when they go to another place, they cannot easily live and earn money. To survive, they have to work hard from their childhood.
As a result
of
this
, it may cause many problems
on
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their body or life.
To conclude
, there are some beneficial and non-beneficial sides
in
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emigrating from where they live with their family at the same time.
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