The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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These maps illustrate the current layout of the industrial zone in
Norbiton
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and the
future
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situation after development activities in
this
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town
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.
Overall
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, it is obvious that there will be a major shift in the destination plan of
Norbiton
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. Its built environment will change from the present situation with only factories to a residential area with plenty of houses and facilities for residents in the
future
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.
Norbiton
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is
also
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projected to increase in size, as the
future
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plans include the construction of some roads and
expansion
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the expansion
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of the
town
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across the river. Zooming in on the details of the redevelopment project, it can be noted that the factories which are now scattered around a main road and a roundabout will disappear altogether,
thus
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making way for housing.
Future
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inhabitants of
Norbiton
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will have easy access to shops and a medical centre located near the old roundabout and a new
to be constructed
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to-be-constructed
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roundabout in the
town
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centre.
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, families with children will be able to benefit from a school and nearby playground on the east side of
town
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.
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, a patch of farmland will be sacrificed to construct new houses across the river in the north of
town
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, where a bridge will provide a direct connection to the
town
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centre.
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