The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These maps illustrate the current layout of the industrial zone in
Norbiton
and the
future
situation after development activities in
this
town
.
Overall
, it is obvious that there will be a major shift in the destination plan of
Norbiton
. Its built environment will change from the present situation with only factories to a residential area with plenty of houses and facilities for residents in the
future
.
Norbiton
is
also
projected to increase in size, as the
future
plans include the construction of some roads and
expansion
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the expansion
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of the
town
across the river. Zooming in on the details of the redevelopment project, it can be noted that the factories which are now scattered around a main road and a roundabout will disappear altogether,
thus
making way for housing.
Future
inhabitants of
Norbiton
will have easy access to shops and a medical centre located near the old roundabout and a new
to be constructed
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to-be-constructed
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roundabout in the
town
centre.
In addition
, families with children will be able to benefit from a school and nearby playground on the east side of
town
.
Moreover
, a patch of farmland will be sacrificed to construct new houses across the river in the north of
town
, where a bridge will provide a direct connection to the
town
centre.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words norbiton, future, town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrate" in your introduction.
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