You and your friend recently went on a holiday together. There is a problem with the photos you have taken during the holiday. Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot. Tell him/her about the problem with your photos. Say what photo you would like him/her to send you. Explain why you need this photos.

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Dear John, Hope

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letter finds you in the best of health and spirit. I'm writing

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letter to discuss the problem

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related to the vacation images. Here I would like to share my problem with you.

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weekend, we went to Shimla and spent our vacation together. That time we captured numerous

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of mountains, temples, and zoos.

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, the number of

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is blurred, and some photos are clicked appropriately. Speaking of which, I want our mountain

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where we did a lot of fun

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clicked many photos in different poses

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, we captured the beauty of the hills.

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, I would like our " pir pandal" hills images because that photo is very natural. That's why I liked it the most. All in all, these photographs brought back memories of my precious time in the mountains which I spent with you on vacation. Please send me all

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on my email id and kept the images for a long time. Warm wishes, Eva.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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176 words

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