Nowadays children have too much freedom. Some people think it may be dangerous in some aspects. Do you agree or disagree with?

It is irrefutable fact that offspring have an abundance of freedom in today’s world. Most people believe that

this

practice might be harmful to them in different ways. In my opinion, I agree that giving unlimited liberty can prove to be dangerous for kids.

However

, I

also

believe that the media may negatively influence them.

To begin

with, children can indulge in criminal activities and they are not focusing on their studies by having too much independence, as at

this

age, they are not mature enough to take the right decision for themselves

that is

why people who are nonviolent can take undue advantage of them and encourage them to be part of their team which surely be going to ruin the future of youngsters.

For instance

, in Brazil, 40% of youngsters are destroying themselves by doing criminal activities. So, young ones deviate from society’s values.

Furthermore

, social media

also

plays a negative role when children misuse it

due to

the plethora of independence

,

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since kids are more influenced by what they saw on phones by using different applications

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is the reason, they imitate the illegal activities which are performed by their bad company

due to

lack of attention for their parents.

As a result

, they not only harm themselves but

also

can be harmful to the society in future.

For example

, in the USA, 40% of young ones are taking drugs

due to

excessive freedom, which is not beneficial for society, because they are the future of the notion. In conclusion, nobody can neglect that young ones may deviate from their studies and be negatively influenced by mass media which leads them towards crime and drugs

due to

freedom.