The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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about revenue which got from Fair-trade
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coffee and
banana
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in
UK
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the UK
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,
Switzerland
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,
Belgium
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and
Sweden
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in five years.
Overall
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sales
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of coffee had
rosen
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risen
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in all five countries during
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period of time
while
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trading of
banana
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declined in 2 countries.
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, income from coffee
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increased from 1.5
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to 20
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in
UK
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between 1994 to 2000
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increased by 3
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millions
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of
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euros, 200000 , 700000 and 20000 euros in
Switzerland
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, Denmark,
Belgium
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and
Sweden
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in order. The highest revenue of
cowas
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was
cows
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Switzerland
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when
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Sweden
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sold the lowest amount.
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,
sales
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of
banana
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were
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drastically increased by more than 3 folds in
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during
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5 years by keeping
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the highest trader of
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banana
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bananas
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in all those years.
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of money earned from trading
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banana
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bananas
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also
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rose
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in Denmark and
Switzerland
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while
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it was fallen moderately in
Belgium
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and
Sweden
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. Almost all the
sales
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were
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increased
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1994
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to 2000 period of time except
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banana
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sales
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in
Belgium
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and
Sweden
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words banana, switzerland, belgium, sweden, sales with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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