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The gap between the rich and the poor is increasing. What problem does this cause? What solution can you suggest?

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In today's society, there are many reasons to cause most countries existing a
gap
 between the rich and the poor. Some
people
 believe that the
gap
 could be a serious problem, and it needs to be solved efficiently.
However
, the
gap
 between the wealthy and poor
people
 increases rapidly in some countries. In
this
 essay, the cause of the increasing
gap
 between the rich and the poor will be explained.
Moreover
,possible solutions will be provided.
Firstly
, the rich
such
 as businessmen usually have their own internal relationships with each other, so they can have more cooperation from internal networking and better cooperative partners for a commerce project that earn more money than the poor.
Secondly
, because the rich have more funding resources, they can deal with various emergencies in the trade
business
 and complete some transactions more smoothly. A possible solution to
this
 problem would be that the rich should cooperate with talented
people
, not just
people
 from their
business
 networking.
This
 could help the rich establish a good public image and expand their networking. It
also
 brings some extraordinary young
people
 into the internal
business
 relationships of the rich.
As a result
, the wealthy probably gain better opportunities to develop their current
business
 or expand their
business
 areas. The other solution is that the country should publish some policies about listed companies helping private enterprises, and the ability of private enterprises to get priority opportunities to co-operate with listed companies
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 and learn from the rich have to face trade emergencies steadily. In conclusion, the social problem of getting richer and richer can not be completely changed It can only balance part of the
gap
 between the rich and the poor by making economic development. of the whole society better and better.
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