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individual greed and selfihness has been the basis of the mordern society. some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respcet for the family and the local community in order to crate a world to live in. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 materialistic era, the public is becoming more and more greedy for their own purpose,
therefore
 many individuals believe that society is accountable to make a happy world to live by the help of some improvement in behaviour with senior citizens, neighbours and relatives. And
also
 respect our culture and tradition. I agree with the given statement. My inclination is justified in the ensuing paragraphs. Out of all the reasons, the foremost one is that younger are learning many things from their elders. If they respect them grandparents may teach them moral values, norms and how to co-operate with others, These ideas lead to a happy and beautiful life for everyone.
Furthermore
, most elder
people
 feel isolated in
this
 fast world, because
people
 are very busy with their work. they give their time to work more than their parents.
For instance
, 50% of old age
people
 feel alone, and
as a
result
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 there are more sick day by day.
this
 is the main reason behind the morality ratio of older
people
.
moreover
, Today's generation faces many difficulties and still they did not receive help from their neighbour, because they do not know who lives next door.
Thus
,
people
 must know their community, whenever any emergency happens that time neighbour is the person to save each other.
However
, I would not overlook the other side too, to initiate with present era
people
 have more responsibility but they face stress and anxiety.
To conclude
, despite
people
 having more responsibility, they must respect their family and society,
then
 in the
future
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 they get good care from the next generation.
this
 way creates a happy and lovable world.
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