Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think the role of a parent should be in their child’s education?

There is a
noticable
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noticeable
fact that a group of
children
never get any praise from their
parents
for their excellent
result
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in school,
whereas
other
children
are always
in
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under
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extensive
pressure
from their
parents
which brings some adverse impacts on them.
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of the negative consequences, some
parents
give excessive
pressure
on their
children
.
However
,
parents
should always
paly
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play
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the supervisor role in a friendly way towards their
child
’s education.
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with, undoubtedly
father
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and mother are the two
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, who cares the most for a
child
.
As a result
, sometimes not being realized the acceptance level of
pressure
of a
child
,
parents
go beyond the limit.
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Additionally
, there is a strong belief among the
parents
that if they do not put some extra
pressure
on their offspring, they might get engaged in unwanted activities in school. So, imposing some strict rules on
children
will be beneficial for them which some
parents
firmly believe. For
instances
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instance
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, in Bangladesh, it is a common scenario where
parents
always keep several private tutors to keep them busy in
study
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the study
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.
Nevertheless
, putting extensive
pressure
on
children
can bring some
negetive
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negative
impacts on them. Considering
this
,
parents
should only play the supervisor role in their
child
’s education. They should always discuss with them
while
imposing any new rule on them.
Besides
,
parents
should keep the relationship in
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amicable
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way so that a
child
never
hesitate
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hesitates
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to ask for any suggestion from his
parents
.
For instance
, in developing countries, some programs are always organised by institutions to teach
gurdians
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guardians
how to deal with their
children
.
To sum up
,
parents
put much
pressure
on their
children
without knowing the negative impacts.
Parents
should advise their
child
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children
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in
such
a friendly way that
child
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the child
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can fearlessly consult with them.
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