“What is more important: financial well-being or pursuing your passion?”

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Thinking about their future,
people
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are often faced with a choice between financial well-being and following their
passion
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. I think everyone has had conversation in her or his head about whether he or she should do something
that is
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aligned with his or her
passion
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or be realistic and find a well-paid
job
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to have a better chance of success in the future. 
Let’s figure out which camp is right. (Spoiler: none of them!) Have you ever heard
people
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saying something like: “Following your
passion
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is the secret of success”?
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,
this
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statement is only partially true. Dictionary defines
passion
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as ‘a strong feeling of enthusiasm or excitement for something or about doing something’.
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,
this
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definition shows that being passionate about something does not mean to be good at it. A person needs time to perfect their skills and get more knowledge before becoming good enough to be able to raise money in their
passion
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’s field.
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, the
passion
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can be changed. So it is reasonable to try different things before making a hasty decision and committing your
life
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to something that soon ceases to be interesting.
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,
people
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are capable of having no
passion
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, which is
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normal.
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, taking into account the above-mentioned disadvantages, other part of
people
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advise to find a
job
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that can at least ensure your financial well-being.
This
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advice is
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not a good one. Financial well-being is ‘a state when a person is able to fully meet their current and ongoing financial obligation and feel secure in its financial future and is able to make choices that allow them to enjoy
life
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’. It seems that
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definition actually separates work and
life
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.
However
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, the average person who works eight hours a day and five days a week does not have much time to enjoy
life
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outside of work.
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, sometimes the need to pay the bills forces
people
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to do something that do not make them happy. In
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case, the
job
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can solve financial issues, but at the same time increases anxiety and stress. So, I think it is important to deepen the
last
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part of the definition by mentioning the importance of enjoying
life
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while
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working.
To sum up
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, there is really no choice between financial well-being and the pursuit of
passion
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. I believe that it is more important to create a professional career based on personal interests, abilities and skills. Once you understand yourself, it is always possible to find a way to raise money whether through a
job
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, or a business.
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