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People now spend more and more time at home than in the past. What are the reasons for this development and what its effects on people and society.

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Nowadays,the number of
people
 spending their time indoors
instead
 of going out is increasing. More
people
 prefer to stay at
home
. The following paragraphs show the reasons and the effects of
this
 behaviour on society.
To begin
 with, the causes of
this
 development are several. On top of
that is
 the internet, more
people
 find pleasure in surfing the internet and playing games in than going out.
Secondly
, there are those who were forced to stay at
home
, and they have used to
this
.
For example
,
due to
 the covid pandemic, many folks
has
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 changed their lifestyle
,
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 and gotten used to staying at
home
.
Lastly
, there is Several research has said that
this
 causes isolation, no communication with others is seen, and
this
 is against the nature of humans, and
this
 will affect society, no more affinity between
people
 is seen, and selfishness is increasing.
Hence
, there's more individualism.
Secondly
, staying at
home
 can not only lead to depression but
also
 to obesity and laziness.
In addition
, the most affected in these are children, because they are missing a wonderful world outdoors, and their communication skills are going to be bad as they grow up, and those kids will spend most of their time watching tv , which can lead to more violence. How will be society
then
 ? In conclusion, it's a necessity to change
this
 situation, as it leads to numerous impacts on all the
people
, before it created more important problems,and that by taking the causes and the effects into consideration.
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