A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at University. He or she has asked for your advice about studying this subject write a letter to your friend in your letter? •give details of the course you took at the University •explain why you recommend the university • give some advice about how to apply
Dear Jasmine,
I am so glad to read your letter, It seems like ages since we
last
met and time indeed flies. That sounds great if you want to apply to my college, I will give you a piece of advice.
Let me tell you about a course where you will face more subjects perhaps some of it talks extensive information morely you should study it early before the day’s exam, other subjects are talking about art, fun, yoga and history trust me are these beneficial for your character.
as you know the university is popular and provides rewards for students to help them to be able to buy their supplies such
as books, and references. Last
term you have cooperative training which will prepare you to look forward to a great job and focus! this
is a crucial thing in this
university.
You must be keen and look at the application dates you have been finding on the website, remember if the number of students completed, closed. then
you do not have another chance. If the university agrees to become a member of them, you will work hard to make a fabulous rate.
feel free if you need to ask me another, I am so proud of you
All the best,
MonirahSubmitted by M on
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coherence cohesion
Be sure to maintain a clear and logical structure throughout your letter. Organize your paragraphs in a way that each contains one main idea and connects clearly to the next.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and polite, reflecting a suitable writing tone for an informal letter to a friend. Maintain this level of friendliness and personal touch in all your correspondence.
task achievement
For task achievement, try to include more specific details about the course and your experience with it, as this will make your advice more personal and relevant to the reader.
task achievement
You have a suitable writing tone for an informal letter, but remember to maintain a high level of formality even in an informal letter when providing advice on serious matters such as educational choices.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite