Some people think that qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at universities or similar academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is growing sentiment today that some important factors
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necessary for people who want to succeed in
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cannot be learned at university or similar academic institutions. From my point of view, I strongly disagree with those because that qualities stills be taught in some schools. Some people make the pragmatic argument that some necessary
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such
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as communication
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, leadership, solving problems,etc which are not taught in
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. In academic institutions, teacher only teaches their
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about academic subjects
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as Math, History, Chemical, Physical,etc. Without a study programme, they do not teach them
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skills
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, or soft
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.
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, In Vietnam,
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always go to
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for 8 hours per day and study academic subjects throughout without any extra-curricular activities and
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classes. From that point,
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need to study other
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that
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them in their
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outside of
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.
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, these situations do not
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over the world. A good example is Finland- a developed country with a high quality of education but has a different way to teach and
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guide
necessary
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inside
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school
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. In their lessons,
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academic subjects, they
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add more practising
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time through their lessons. They give their
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some group work exams and teach them how to create and do smooth teamwork. They
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make more extracurricular activities related to the subject
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as
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projects or charity activities. So, their
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can gain more experience and
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improve their necessary
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. In conclusion,
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are still learning important
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in
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.
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, some schools in developing countries do not find the right way to teach their
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. The solutions are that they need to follow in the footstep of developed countries, and Finland is one of those.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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