The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The pie charts illustrate how
Japan
and
Malaysia
averagely spend money on health care, transport, food, housing and other services and goods in the year 2010.
Overall
, health care was the least expenditure in both countries,
while
housing,transportation, food and other goods and services were the most significant payments in
this
given year. In comparison,
Japan
allocated a considerable amount of fees for transport than
Malaysia
.
Japan
's housing expenses
was
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drain out cash by 21% and, experienced a more than 13% increase to 34% in
Malaysia
. Expenses for food were 24% in
Japan
and
Malaysia
rose
this
figure to 27%. Other goods and services were 29% of
Japan
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household
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and
Malaysia
reduced it by almost a quarter out of all. It accounted for 26%.
In contrast
, in ,
Japan
health care and transport remunerations were 6% and 20% respectively and
Malaysia
spend half of that and it was 3% and 10% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, malaysia with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household expenditures
  • proportion
  • cultural differences
  • economic differences
  • living standards
  • real estate market
  • public transportation
  • private transportation
  • infrastructure
  • government healthcare policies
  • quality of life
  • holistic view
  • inflation
  • economic growth
  • societal norms
  • globalization
  • communication expenses
  • education expenses
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