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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the country side. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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People
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's choices of where to live have become more challenging,
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, one part of the society thinks living in the urban
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 is preferable
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 the other part of the society says rural life is finer.
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, in my own opinion,
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 believe choosing where to settle should be based on personal preference and benefits.
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. On the one side, it is often argued that living in a metropolis is more beneficial since the urban
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 has more basic amenities
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 as healthcare and better road.
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 , Accra has the best health care system in the country and many patients are transferred to Accra for treatment.
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,
people
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 often believe the metropolitan is finer than under-developed
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 where they think the metropolis has more entertainment facilities which take away some boredom and stress.
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, visiting the park and cinema contribute to releasing stress from work. On the other side, it is often agreed that living in a serene environment with refreshing air and greenery nature has many health benefits. Air pollution in rural
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 is less
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 of a minimum number of harmful gas from cars and factories.
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, less population and fewer cars result in less production of unhealthy gas.One other benefit of living in a less developed
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 is having a feel for nature,
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,
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 love to experience and connect with nature by enjoying the fresh breeze with the astonishing view of the mountain and trees.
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, a rural
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 like aburi in Ghana has breathtaking views of the mountain and hills which has influenced many
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 to move there. In conclusion, as both developed and undeveloped
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 have their own advantages, I believe it is up to the individuals to make a choice in regard to what they need.
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