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Student today can access the information online so libraries are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#student #access #information #libraries
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It has been suggested that
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 are getting higher grades because of google,
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, books in
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libraries
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iclude
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include
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 on google
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easier,
consequently
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,
libraries
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 are not essential.
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analyse
 why online
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have
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attack
a track
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 people, and why
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 are important. It is often argued that
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 are using their devices to access
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google
, searching for figures is
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easier because
,
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 knowledge can be
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shown
 in one minute,
that
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 can save
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a lot
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, and effort.
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,
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 have older materials than the
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,
therefore
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, the
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 provides more timely
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 because it is changing constantly. In the vast majority of
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libraries
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 have more accurate
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 than the
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 as a
,
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 result
students
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 can be more
knowladgeable
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knowledgeable
.
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Additionally
,
students
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 can be more
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focuses
 when they are studying in the
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,
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,
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intrept
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interpret
interest
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, some
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 like to search
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somthing
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something
 on their computer so video games can attract them to play
instead
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 of
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studying
.
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, online
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requires
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 really expensive and, some
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uncapable
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incapable
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it
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. In
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conclusion
, I
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believe
 the benefits of online
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information
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 are more than the
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drawbacks
drawback
.
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